It needs some improvement. It was my first time for me. I could not tell who is the employer or the student. The room was small no room to move around freely, you have always to ask someone to let you pass through.
Peter gave a fabulous talk that had so much to say about Jefferson and the world of that era. He supplied great insight into things Jefferson was doing that are considered "new wave" today. The length and depth of the talk rooted in 35 years of learning about Monticello was greatly appreciated.